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>> 05 February 2010


Spirits in my heart crawl
                  &
Evokes the bygone tale
                  To
Seize the scenes behind
                  Where
Friends forge to win pride
                  &
Breaks the terrain I owned
                  For
Time smiled at my hurt heart
                  &
Sighed in tears to fill emptiness
                  Oh
Days ran dry & nights died away
                  Ah
I sang a song counting on time
                  If
It heard the same song in tears
                  To
Soothe my broken wings in shape
                  &
To hurl the scenes afar, forever…   

5 comments:

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ February 5, 2010 at 5:41 AM  

hey that's so sad poem but i love sad poems..:P

anyway...i like your style of posting the poem..you're so nice in depicting your emotions..

keep posting~!

(P.S. if you'll reply to this comment..pls. put it in my blog's comment box so that i can update my comments :D)

chitz February 7, 2010 at 10:15 AM  

beautiful but sad...may i ask,y dis melancholy in ur poems?

N J February 10, 2010 at 2:02 PM  

Ayu - Thanx a lot :)

Chitz - Thanx a lot :)

Tongue Trip February 11, 2010 at 8:35 AM  

to hurl the scenes afar, forever...if only it could happen. acute despondency, this one needs needs to heal.

N J February 22, 2010 at 7:44 AM  

Tongue Trip - Thanx a lot :)

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