The bells…
>> 02 February 2010
*Bells*
*Wind*
*Drizzle*
*Chant*
O dear dead, rise from your grave
Dark grave
Six feet, O you have departed lone
Cold shell
Once you lived as the king in a place
Peacefully
Sweet lass lay beneath the pastures
Bare sight
O shadows, passerby with its gain
Empty pitcher
Days in the life has been gone so far
Grand memoir
Driven out from the dark blue skies
Dead, O death
O flowers, bud your sweet thorns
Cover the clan
O death, strange secret fanatic
*Chant*
*Drizzle*
*Wind*
*Bells*
7 comments:
Good one bro, its got a Gothic touch and the chillness of death all around...
Cold...that really was...
Everytime I read something written by you..I'm awestruck..
Brings out the Wow factor!!
WOW...death in all its glory....excellent piece...made me smile....:)
Death - A mystery of sorts, but thatz the ultimate destiny.. nice one N J.
Joe - Thanx a lot bro :)
Jaunty - Good to see you on the page :) Thanx a lot.
Tia - Death is one of my favorite topics too :) Thanx a lot.
Subu - Thanx a lot :)
painlessness, invoking and almost cajoling its end. romancing death and bringing memories to life. this is looming, grim and inevitable, strong poetry, NJ.
Tongue Trip - Thanx a lot :)
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