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An ancient prayer…

>> 16 February 2010

The gust fell upon the ferryboat
For it naively sank to the moon, &
His love stood awake of his return, &
She sang a song to the blue skies

O Lord, Guard my guardian
For his craft is full of Gold
Send him a guardian angel
For us to live in love forever

The dark holes poured packed
For its fiery wrecked the yacht, &
the gale rushed upon the waves, &
pushed him away from the craft

O Lord, Guard my guardian
For his craft is full of Gold…
Make his sail smooth & sane
For us to live in eternal ecstasy

And whilst she recites the mantra,
ferry full of Gold sank to the west, &
Crossed the silver sea in vain, &
Went astray with all the glitzy gold…


♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ February 17, 2010 at 5:46 AM  

nice poem..kinda dark huh..? i love the figurative speech you used..

and the ending is nice..pretty ironic of what the woman was praying for..maybe coz she's so selfish abut the gold..:3

(P.S. if you'll reply to this comment..pls. put it in my blog's comment box so that i can update my comments :D)

Adisha February 18, 2010 at 4:49 AM  

Wow... First time I'm visiting here and I'm impressed. Very well written and kind of grey ... subjective to person's vision... nice one !

akanksha February 18, 2010 at 9:04 AM  

Dark verses there!Amazing piece! :)

vinitha February 19, 2010 at 4:46 PM  

words cant express, how brilliantly is this piece =) love ur style of writing!!

N J February 22, 2010 at 7:44 AM  

Ayu - Thanx for being around :) Appreciate it.

Adisha - Thanx :) Keep penning.

Akanksha - Thanx :) Well, I usually write dark n blues stuff.

Vinitha - Thanx :) Just read your poem. Neat stuff.

Escapist February 24, 2010 at 7:39 AM  

Great ,
m here after long time.....

Was really women selfish......?


N J February 25, 2010 at 7:47 AM  

Glad to see you around... Well, i guess she was... thanx :)

Devil Incarnate... March 2, 2010 at 5:45 AM  

Beautiful... sad & mystic at the same time..
loved ur way of writing...
n by the way.. 1st time here...

N J March 2, 2010 at 8:50 AM  

Thank you :) Hope to see you again in here. Cheers! March 3, 2010 at 11:15 PM  

Another good poem here. You have very good collection of your creations. Any plans of publishing it

N J March 13, 2010 at 5:35 AM  

Subu - Thanx :) Hopefully by the end of this year.

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