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Life in a terrarium...

>> 24 November 2009



Sweet, soft yet mellow
Fib, fall, uh, oh, so fast
River in a dry terrarium
Misty clouds coat around
Filthy creeps crawl in, Ah
You reap what you sow,
In a paddy field full of gold
Some picked the stone, sand
And I left the green far alone
Are you through the patch?
There are twenty seven pebbles
Few men rushed to lay hands
Some died and the rest were killed
Oh, don't let the news reach home
Their sweet home, wives all alone
Row the boat, chase the twilight
Eat the joy, rush in a flicker
And comfort them, oh devil…
You know, that’s sad…
In a muddy land they plot huts
Sudden rush of the west breeze
Oh, ah, sigh… it blew them away…

12 comments:

Anju November 25, 2009 at 11:03 AM  

Hey tats a lovely poem... loved the way its been composed... not to forget i really really loved the picture..... wat to go bro..

regards
anju

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ November 27, 2009 at 5:13 AM  

whoa..that's cool..though its a lil too hard to understand..haha..but i get the meaning now..just requires a lil thinking..great!

Escapist November 27, 2009 at 11:39 AM  

Oh very beautiful thoughts coming out of a free mind...


Joliiees:-|)

Jaunty anima December 4, 2009 at 9:09 PM  

It's been long since I visited..n u've written consistently well!!So this one's another feather in ur cap!!
Cheers!!

N J December 5, 2009 at 5:50 AM  

Anju

Thanx :)

N J December 5, 2009 at 5:51 AM  

Ayu

Hope that I made sense to you :) Thanx

N J December 5, 2009 at 5:54 AM  

Joliiees

Thanx :)

N J December 5, 2009 at 5:55 AM  

Jaunty

That was really sweet of you. Thanx :)

Escapist December 6, 2009 at 8:34 AM  

Thats really very amazing piece of your poems...


Jolliieess:)

subu.ps December 6, 2009 at 9:48 PM  

Stumbled upon here from somewhere, read through 3 of ur latest poems, and u deserve a pat on the back for these work and all the best for continuing this good work :)

N J December 7, 2009 at 11:30 AM  

Jolliees

Thanx again :)

N J December 7, 2009 at 11:31 AM  

Subu

Thanx! I feel honored :)

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