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When 3/\O7 hurts LOVE...

>> 17 October 2009





It’s a pretty sunshine that bursts out through the hole


While I’m lying down in here, waiting for rains to fall


These pretty floras getting dried and I’m waving arms


For rains to fall, wet these leaves and breathe them life 


It’s a pretty sky and those birds flying for their nest


While I’m lying down in here, hearing their pensive prayers


There are pretty branches, touching the deep blue sky


And I see no place for them to rest, in peace and harmony 


Now, I see a dark wall blocking my vision, passion


And I run towards it, to break the wall, crack its head


Oh, I climb the wall to reach its top to tap its wit


But I see a word scribbled out in blood, thick blood


Now, I’m hanging upside down, gripping on to the wall


Reading it as 3/\O7, for love is all we need…

20 comments:

Anju October 17, 2009 at 7:18 AM  

awwwwwwww tats such a lovely poem... simply superb... excellent creativity.... :) just loved it :)

Giuliana October 17, 2009 at 7:33 AM  

NJ, See you thought you were happy in that dark hole but once your vision was cloudy you realized that there was more out there and you wanted to see it all, now you are dangling upside down, what are you going to do now that you have seen the truth? It cannot be ignored.

Natalia October 17, 2009 at 7:39 AM  

Love your poem! Who sacraficed their lives for love? Well, I can think of one person. That's how I see the blood on the wall.

тнƨ [ƨcняɛι] October 17, 2009 at 8:39 AM  

really wonderful and amazing! XD

Katie Walters October 17, 2009 at 10:54 AM  

Your writing is wonderfully inspiring, as always....

Sorcerer October 17, 2009 at 11:39 PM  

AWesome!! lovely and fantastic lines!!

~Nisha~ October 18, 2009 at 11:54 AM  

Hmmm... hope you are doing good... the poem is good as usual... and piercing too... :) but i really do hope i will see a poem that smiles... i hope you get wht i mean.. hope to see a bright face soon... :) nice poem btw...l loved the last 2 lines...
~Nisha~

N J October 18, 2009 at 1:45 PM  

Anju

thanx :)

N J October 18, 2009 at 1:46 PM  

Giul

I'm still taking time for sunrays to guide me through the narrow way to see the hidden treasure kept for me! hehe :)

N J October 18, 2009 at 1:47 PM  

Nats

Glad that you like it... well said 'n' do come back to read more :)

N J October 18, 2009 at 1:47 PM  

тнƨ [ƨcняɛι]

thanx :)

N J October 18, 2009 at 1:48 PM  

Katie

thanx :)

N J October 18, 2009 at 1:48 PM  

Sorcerer

thanx :)

N J October 18, 2009 at 1:49 PM  

Sis

Glad to see you in here... hope you had a great time in India... i'm doing good... thanx :)

Mike October 18, 2009 at 2:21 PM  

Beautiful work NJ. I'm particularly fond of the images you use, they're quite arresting. You should consider submitting to this blog I help maintain for creative writers, http://picturewortha.blogspot.com/.

Great work!

N J October 18, 2009 at 9:19 PM  

Mike

Thanx buddy :) Well, i've joined that page. Hope to write out there soon. Cheers :)

Keshi October 19, 2009 at 6:17 PM  

Love never hurts NJ...people do.

Keshi.

N J October 19, 2009 at 8:42 PM  

Well said! Thanx :)

LIFE: A Collection Of Beautiful Memories! October 22, 2009 at 9:37 AM  

i surely can relate to every bit f it..... everything around u is beautiful...everyone's busy in their own lives... in their own happiness...tat they fail to notice u... ur emotions...ur tears.... u don't want anyone to sympathize with u... but yes to hug u.. caress u... support u... nurture u!!!

love u unconditionally....

i wait for someone to come to me..
don't know why cant anyone see..
me... my sorrow...and my pain...
i know there's no gain...
so lemme end it now myself...
lemme go and die again!!!

vei true...
keep goin!
Megha

N J October 22, 2009 at 1:53 PM  

I liked your comment. Mature thoughts! Well, nobody wants to sympathize with us... Nor do we want them to pretend that they care but a gentle smile to tell us that they care for us... Hugs Megha!

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