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Here she stays awake


untouched, unseen


she weeps, it counts


Oh bad, that’s sad


she hears the clock


ticking twelfth hour


for his hour has come


to wave his arms,


and fall from the gallows pole


when the moon fades away


while the clouds cover its ray


he’ll be away, she will be alone

17 comments:

Bhupesh October 22, 2009 at 3:42 AM  

Awesome one dude!!!!

Keep them coming

BHupesh

Sorcerer October 22, 2009 at 6:31 AM  

great one

LIFE: A Collection Of Beautiful Memories! October 22, 2009 at 9:25 AM  
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LIFE: A Collection Of Beautiful Memories! October 22, 2009 at 9:38 AM  

reminds me of the lines i once wrote duh in hindi...


bahut sambhaal kar rakhi hain teri yaadein...
wo pal.. wo lamhe...
pyasi aankhen tarasta hua mann...
aaj bhi rula jati hai mere dil ko...
teri har baat...
wo aakhri mulaquat!!

great one...
keep govin!!

Megha

Kay October 22, 2009 at 10:04 AM  

oh my! that picture, those words... as if you've had a nightmare and never wake

Anju October 22, 2009 at 10:54 AM  

awesome bro!!! really nice :) wonderful design as well :)

N J October 22, 2009 at 1:54 PM  

Bhupesh

Thank you bro :)

N J October 22, 2009 at 1:54 PM  

Sorcerer

Thank you :)

N J October 22, 2009 at 1:56 PM  

Megha

Sweet lines there... Like i said in the earlier post, you think too deep and it's the best about a true artist. Cheers!

N J October 22, 2009 at 1:57 PM  

Kay

thanx :) i like this picture a lot... yeah! it's like a nightmare! :)

Anonymous October 22, 2009 at 4:13 PM  

Mind blowing!!!!

*$p@Rsh!t@* October 24, 2009 at 1:50 AM  

nice blog!!!!!!!
inspired me!!!!!!!!!;)

Giuliana October 24, 2009 at 7:06 PM  

Sounds like war for him and angst for her. But it still sounds like love....
I love your new blog design!!!! It's really great Sunshine...where's the Sunshine in this dark place? Hmmm...just outside the front door. Thought you fooled everyone huh? Not me, Sweetpea!

N J October 25, 2009 at 11:10 AM  

*$p@Rsh!t@*

Thank You :)

N J October 25, 2009 at 11:11 AM  

hehe :) Sweets i didn't fool anyone... glad that you could find the sunshine just outside the front door :) Well, it's about love, anguish, war...

Giuliana October 26, 2009 at 7:49 PM  

Ha, I knew it! Anyways, great work from my fav author!!! As usual! :)

N J October 26, 2009 at 9:18 PM  

>Hugs< :)

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