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>> 23 September 2009

These bells tell the blissful tale
There we see mirage on walls
Away she stood, across the vale
Like a princess dressed so good
To bid bye along with her prince

These wings tell the wistful tale
There we see our lives on sand
Away he stood, across the stream
Like a hangman waiting for us
To bid bye along with the memoir

And the lighthouse that we see
And the golden ray that we feel
All the way from start to end
All that we feel, all that we see
Comes to an end when the race end
...all that we see comes to an end


Girl Meets Gun September 23, 2009 at 10:22 PM  

I like your poetry...reminds me of when I was into writing it. I had a whole website dedicated to it, but it was REALLY bad lol. Your's is actually good.

Love the picture, btw...I love lighthouses and the ocean.

Shas September 23, 2009 at 11:52 PM  


Brianne September 24, 2009 at 6:01 AM  

There's nothing quite like poetry to make me feel inept, heh. This sounds so beautiful and melodic, but I don't really get it. Anyway, don't mind me, keep up the great work for all the people who do understand poetry! :)

Kay September 24, 2009 at 8:51 PM  

with each ending there is a beginning...beginning of the end... delightful read!

Vidhu .. !! September 24, 2009 at 11:43 PM  

"all that we see comes to an end .."

plain beautiful lyrics :) makes me want to write something !! ur post actually gave me an inspiration for a new post for my blog !!

loved it !!

Anju September 25, 2009 at 2:30 AM  

hey this is such a lovely poem... loved every line & every bit of it :) its just perfect.... very well written

N J September 25, 2009 at 6:37 AM  

@ Nicolette

That was a sweet comment :) But yeh, I don't mind to read those poems. All poems rise from genuine feeling. Thanx :)

@ Shas

Thanx :)

N J September 25, 2009 at 6:39 AM  

@ Brianne

Well, at times even i don't get the picture from a poem. :) You just being honest here. Thanx :)

@ Kay

Yeh... I'm glad that you got the exact picture i was trying to convey :) thanx a lot.

N J September 25, 2009 at 6:42 AM  

@ Vidhu

Well, i feel so good reading the word 'inspire'. Did i? Thank you! I'll surely read it :)

@ Anju

Thanks dear :) I was just trying to write something. Glad that you liked it :)

Anonymous September 25, 2009 at 6:56 AM  

your a poet and
I had no idea about it :-). Cool

тнƨ [ƨcняɛι] September 25, 2009 at 7:52 AM  

nice poem!^_^

Vidhu .. !! September 25, 2009 at 7:56 AM  

I put up my poem :) but its no way near to yours !! have just put up a rough version .... will work on it later to give it a final shape !!

Samadrita September 25, 2009 at 8:29 AM  

Those were a few lovely lines.
And I like your blog name. :)
Stay in touch!

N J September 25, 2009 at 1:25 PM  

@ thaЯnGni

Thanx :)

@ Vidhu

I'm just coming to your page :)

@ Samadrita

Thanx :)

Joe September 28, 2009 at 5:19 AM  

Awesome work bro...

N J September 28, 2009 at 6:43 AM  

Thanx bro :)

Mr. Pramathesh™ Borkotoky October 23, 2009 at 9:40 PM  

Well written! I liked that you striked off the last line. It gave an extra effect.

N J October 24, 2009 at 10:44 AM  

Yeah, i wanted to strike it off... it was intentional hehe :) thanx

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