...that lighthouse
>> 23 September 2009
These bells tell the blissful tale
There we see mirage on walls
Away she stood, across the vale
Like a princess dressed so good
To bid bye along with her prince
These wings tell the wistful tale
There we see our lives on sand
Away he stood, across the stream
Like a hangman waiting for us
To bid bye along with the memoir
And the lighthouse that we see
And the golden ray that we feel
All the way from start to end
All that we feel, all that we see
Comes to an end when the race end
...all that we see comes to an end
...all that we see comes to an end
18 comments:
I like your poetry...reminds me of when I was into writing it. I had a whole website dedicated to it, but it was REALLY bad lol. Your's is actually good.
Love the picture, btw...I love lighthouses and the ocean.
Well-written.
There's nothing quite like poetry to make me feel inept, heh. This sounds so beautiful and melodic, but I don't really get it. Anyway, don't mind me, keep up the great work for all the people who do understand poetry! :)
with each ending there is a beginning...beginning of the end... delightful read!
"all that we see comes to an end .."
plain beautiful lyrics :) makes me want to write something !! ur post actually gave me an inspiration for a new post for my blog !!
loved it !!
hey this is such a lovely poem... loved every line & every bit of it :) its just perfect.... very well written
@ Nicolette
That was a sweet comment :) But yeh, I don't mind to read those poems. All poems rise from genuine feeling. Thanx :)
@ Shas
Thanx :)
@ Brianne
Well, at times even i don't get the picture from a poem. :) You just being honest here. Thanx :)
@ Kay
Yeh... I'm glad that you got the exact picture i was trying to convey :) thanx a lot.
@ Vidhu
Well, i feel so good reading the word 'inspire'. Did i? Thank you! I'll surely read it :)
@ Anju
Thanks dear :) I was just trying to write something. Glad that you liked it :)
your a poet and
I had no idea about it :-). Cool
hey!
nice poem!^_^
I put up my poem :) but its no way near to yours !! have just put up a rough version .... will work on it later to give it a final shape !!
Those were a few lovely lines.
And I like your blog name. :)
Stay in touch!
@ thaЯnGni
Thanx :)
@ Vidhu
I'm just coming to your page :)
@ Samadrita
Thanx :)
Awesome work bro...
Thanx bro :)
Well written! I liked that you striked off the last line. It gave an extra effect.
Yeah, i wanted to strike it off... it was intentional hehe :) thanx
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