~ ~ ~ The Color Of Sky ~ ~ ~
>> 19 September 2009
That sky knows it all, from the start to end
In her eyes I see sparkling stars, charming
When these strings pitch a song to our past
Oh, the same dark blue sky in yellow shade
Ah, all we know is about reflections of life
All we feel is what's been given and taken
And we all rest under the same sky, blue sky
Sigh, they are proud of this fragile globe,
And these darkness clouds around us soon
Alas, we all have nothing but six feet to brag
If and only if humanity had lone meaning,
I would have painted the skies in yellow…
15 comments:
beautiful...if only each could have their own to paint, or do we?...
hey tats a very lovely poem... wish i could paint the sky in ma colors but its just splendid the way it is...
brilliantly written
Regards
Yasmin
This is really beautiful. You've captured what most of us think at times, but just can't find the words to say.
that was really nicely written!
Keep penning,
Amit
Kind of somber but not depressing.
O.F.C.J.
Love it!! Really got me thinking, and that's what I love about poems haha. :]
"the same sky, blue sky.." Loved them..
"I would have painted the skies in yellow…" good idea..:-)
yellow skies and blue leaves!!
Made a wonderful read..
Thats very pouring.......painting the sky the way you want is always fun.......
jollieess:-)
@ Kay - thanx... upon us all a lill rain must fall... yeh :)
@ Anju - Spread the color... Paint it the way you prefer :)
@ TheBeez - thanx :) glad that i'm not the only one who think about it.
@ amit - thanx :)
@ O.F.C.G - thanx :)
@ Amy - thanx :) poems do make us think, i second you :)
@a tint of mist - Yeh... you just made imagine about yellow sky and blue leaves :) thanx
@ Escapist - eh :) yeh... thanx a lot. I read your poems. beautiful i must say :)
This is beautiful. Well written. I love it. :)
thanx :)
well written :)
thanx :)
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