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>> 19 September 2009




That sky knows it all, from the start to end


In her eyes I see sparkling stars, charming


When these strings pitch a song to our past


Oh, the same dark blue sky in yellow shade


Ah, all we know is about reflections of life


All we feel is what's been given and taken


And we all rest under the same sky, blue sky


Sigh, they are proud of this fragile globe,


And these darkness clouds around us soon


Alas, we all have nothing but six feet to brag


If and only if humanity had lone meaning,


I would have painted the skies in yellow…

15 comments:

Kay September 19, 2009 at 8:15 AM  

beautiful...if only each could have their own to paint, or do we?...

Anju September 19, 2009 at 9:12 AM  

hey tats a very lovely poem... wish i could paint the sky in ma colors but its just splendid the way it is...

brilliantly written

Regards
Yasmin

TheBeez September 19, 2009 at 9:46 AM  

This is really beautiful. You've captured what most of us think at times, but just can't find the words to say.

amit September 19, 2009 at 2:20 PM  

that was really nicely written!

Keep penning,
Amit

A & J September 19, 2009 at 5:30 PM  
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O.F.C.J. September 19, 2009 at 5:30 PM  

Kind of somber but not depressing.

O.F.C.J.

Amy September 19, 2009 at 6:25 PM  

Love it!! Really got me thinking, and that's what I love about poems haha. :]

a tint of mist September 19, 2009 at 10:03 PM  

"the same sky, blue sky.." Loved them..
"I would have painted the skies in yellow…" good idea..:-)
yellow skies and blue leaves!!

Made a wonderful read..

Escapist September 20, 2009 at 2:05 AM  

Thats very pouring.......painting the sky the way you want is always fun.......


jollieess:-)

N J September 20, 2009 at 2:09 AM  

@ Kay - thanx... upon us all a lill rain must fall... yeh :)

@ Anju - Spread the color... Paint it the way you prefer :)

@ TheBeez - thanx :) glad that i'm not the only one who think about it.

@ amit - thanx :)

@ O.F.C.G - thanx :)

@ Amy - thanx :) poems do make us think, i second you :)

@a tint of mist - Yeh... you just made imagine about yellow sky and blue leaves :) thanx

N J September 20, 2009 at 2:11 AM  

@ Escapist - eh :) yeh... thanx a lot. I read your poems. beautiful i must say :)

RdGarnet September 20, 2009 at 5:59 PM  

This is beautiful. Well written. I love it. :)

N J September 21, 2009 at 2:13 AM  

thanx :)

Shibani September 23, 2009 at 11:23 AM  

well written :)

N J September 23, 2009 at 11:40 AM  

thanx :)

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