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>> 08 September 2009
My brain shower thoughts like the rain
When this mind set its journey to the past
Alone, avid and vivid they become known
Red lights in the moonlight and cold gust
Oh so far away from fall and down we go
Alone we go; along they come, among all
When they gaze at me and phrase on me
A line that carved on my heart thrust into
And my soul is bleeding, weeping for light
A Light for right as truth stays bright, white
And my psyche comes back to the present
Oh the world seems to be old, wild, weird
Wired all the way since start to the end
These frames been moved and crushed
Dreams been thrown, desires been piled
Oh wait; ah hold on, life must go on… on…
12 comments:
i read the poem more than once..and these verses..
And my soul is bleeding, weeping for light
A Light for right as truth stays bright, white
And my psyche comes back to the present
Oh the world seems to be old, wild, weird...
i felt my heartbeat was heavy like i was feeling the burden of the past,a wish to be free frm the past,guess we all wish so...
Ur words have the power to make people feel....
:)
hehe :) Now that was a surprise :) Thanx Nags... I could feel it here :)
i read it i dunno how many times... and every tym i cud feel each and every emotion... the conflicts tat are always govin on with in us... those confusions... those questions which could never be answered... those situations tat render us helpless.... those memories when recollected and the feeling tat tym wont ever come back!!
and yes then realizing that life isnt over yet... it still is a mystery and holds something gud for us... ya tat hope which never dies!
life must go on and on...
coz we are all fyters...not quitters....
just everything!!!
very well written!
cheers..
Megha
i guess i got a lot many thoughts from your comment... well, that was a brilliant take on the poem... impressed. oh well.. thank u...
profound!!!
i could connect to it completely since my lat post had a lot to do with these hidden deisres..
n yes life still goes on..
loved the way u wrote it.
Keep writing!
take care!
thank u swati... :)
U have a beautiful blog bro!
I wanted to follow it, pls add the followers widget!
it's already there in the right hand side bro :)thanx
Oh beautiful verses......the light can overcome once you give it a way to tingle down and show the long and clear life long.....
Jolliesss:-)
:) :) :)
The end is what intrigued me most... Evn though thats the reality(life goes on...no matter what you say or what you do), very few accept the fact or try to come to terms with it... Liked that about the poem.. Nice once!
Yeh... rightly said. In a way, you have taken the best out of it... thanx :)
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